Completely Unaware

Posted by Ralph 7 comments

Silently she sleeps
still unaware
that her love is nearby
if she could only wake
and if magic of love could partake

Carefully he wonders
if she does really care
and the magic of love decipher
one of its own wares

her face hidden in the pillow
hidden from his stare
even then she wonders
if he does really care

somewhere. someday yonder
with wings of love they fly
but for now he will just stare at her
while she calmly sleeps nearby

-sapir-

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Jun 29, 2010
3:01 pm
#1 jan geronimo :

Great to see you try your hand at writing poetry when so many other young people follow the line of least resistance. Text speak. Anguished Facebook status updates.

Wonderful read. I hope there’s more where that came from. :)

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Roy Reply:
June 30th, 2010 at 5:21 am

Thanks Jan! I do hope there’ll be more (see the time elapsed between and previous post)

Too bad I can’t nominate him for EIB 2010 hahaha!

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Ralph Reply:
July 1st, 2010 at 2:12 am

thanks tito jan..

I already have some collection of poems.. it’s just that those are still unfinished..

I also hope I get to write another one that’s at least as good as this..

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Jun 30, 2010
2:38 am
#2 MinnieRunner :

Sweet! I picture out how a man is staring at his sleeping girl. ♥

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Roy Reply:
June 30th, 2010 at 5:22 am

Thanks for dropping Madz!

Sure hope my son would be encouraged to write more :)

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Jul 1, 2010
1:26 am
#3 elmot :

Wow! This is wonderful talent…hmmm… I can see a budding lourd de veyra here, eheheh!

Way to, hope to read more poems from your son Bro :D

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